Man, alot of people that responded to the OP are just downright rude.
To the OP: I think what you have is better than nothing, my friend. I would add some foiled meat. I would also reduce the different type of rices to the same type, and instead have different methods of prep. Overall, not bad, also you are better off than 90% are so good job.
Personally, I don't keep with the thought of fishing or hunting along my way. I also don't like food that I would have to prep more than 1 minute. In my BOB I carry enough MRE meal pouches, broken down to save weight, to sustain me for 7 days. I also have enough rice and etc, should that be used up to prepare my own food. After that, if I run out of food I have the items that "could" produce me other foods, like traps and small fishing gear, along with my firearms. So basically I have a three tier system. 1) pre packaged meals that require nothing but to eat them. 2) foods that are quick to prepare, should number 1 run out. And finally, 3) if all else fails, the means to hunt, fish and forage and scavenge.
Good luck dude! And don't let all the negative nancies that replied to this thread get you down.