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Good story. I would make the 'program' longer. 30 days is not much to learn stuff like that, although he was motivated.
There is a part two that pushes the program out even further. Thanks for your comments.
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There is a part two that pushes the program out even further. Thanks for your comments.
Lol, I just realized 'To Learn' was the name of the story, and not a request for criticism! I was trying to think of a way I could constructively criticize the story and that was all I could come up with, that the program could be longer. I didn't mean to come on here and nitpick your stuff.

How about a better title? JK

Good work, keep going
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Very good story. Now to part 2.
Thanks for sharing.
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Another good short story....

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