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Old 02-03-2010, 08:59 PM
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To help JaySlay out so that he can fully edit and complete his story I am hosting it for him on my site.

Even if you have been following the story it is worth a read because he completely updated and edited it.


GreyWorld Chapter 1

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We'll have the rest for you as JaySlay finishes editing and fixing them.
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Bumping this up to the top.
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Sorry, not interested in stories from a felonous looter's perspective........
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*Chuckle*

If it makes you feel better, Chapter two has the perspective of a family bunkered down in the same city as the "felonous looters". (Spelling?)
Hint: They almost got BBq'ed.

Edit: The directive of this chapter was to "know your enemy". I find it important.
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Sounds Cool. Changing characters and perspective is always fun.

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It is said that if you know your enemies and know yourself, you will not be imperiled in a hundred battles; if you do not know your enemies but do know yourself, you will win one and lose one; if you do not know your enemies nor yourself, you will be imperiled in every single battle. -Sun Tzu
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Looking forward to chapter 2. Good start so far.
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Nothing worng with playing Devil's Advocate. You might even find the best in yourself when doing the worst.
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Very interesting start.... sort of an R rated version of "The Road..." I am looking forward to seeing how the characters and stories develop...
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Nothing worng with playing Devil's Advocate. You might even find the best in yourself when doing the worst.
Dude, are you for real? Tell me how you can, in any imagination, find something good in yourself, while you're raping a 7 yr old? or a 80 yr old woman? Gutting a 10 yr old? Killing an innocent family for their supplies?
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To defuse, the narrative serves as a way to create an imaginary enemy. One fueled by my imagination, that can be used to counter-strategize. I would be a mean ass bad guy. But Im not.

I've had some people berate me as a looter because of this story. Its funny, because they don't get it.
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Sorry, not interested in stories from a felonous looter's perspective........
Then why even chime in? Thats pretty rude to say. Plus there is a lot of truth to the murderous ways of looters and you could probably learn a thing or two. Just turing yourself off to reality is what we are trying to avoid here at this site. otherwise you are just one of them.
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I had no idea this was going to stir up such a debate.

Maybe I should add a stronger rating to the article like:

Warning: May cause you to question your beliefs and the beliefs of those around you
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I don't understand why, it's just a story (and a pretty good one so far). I can't speak for everyone here, but I'm looking forward to the rest of it....


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Pro-Pain,

I completely agree. I am not taking it too serious.
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Works been slow and been waiting for more. Keeps me entertained. People that are taking this serious should go read a biography if they want to take everything so serious. I mean it is just a story.
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I don't understand why, it's just a story (and a pretty good one so far). I can't speak for everyone here, but I'm looking forward to the rest of it....


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Agreed. I think its a good spin to tell the story from a raiders perspective. Its definitely different and I like it so far. Bring on chapter 2!
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Chapter two will be complete by Friday! Thanks guys!
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dude, where's chapter two?? can't wait
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You in luck 5ilverado, JaySlay sent me Chapter 2 last night and I just put it up

GreyWorld Chapter 2

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Nothing worng with playing Devil's Advocate. You might even find the best in yourself when doing the worst.
So, you like snuff films too??

Sometimes after reading a too violent book, nightmares would wake me for weeks. I've got young grandkids and reading what some people do to kids is not my cup of tea.
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