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Good story.
You have an interesting way with words. Glocks !!!.....RVM45 ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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Good work so far. Thank you.
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Things that had been taken for granted in another time were now to be extremely coveted. Garrision had the essentials things covered like food and water and the boring stuff like that. Vanessa had given herself the task of preserving the less sought after, yet equally important little luxuries that had come to be considered as unnecessary. Bucking the trend of discarding the niceties in life was a selfish-sounding stance to take, but the folded pink silk nightly in the draw was a piece of forgotten art. Anyone finding a buried Mona Lisa painting would have an obligation to humanity. A piece of tightly woven and cut material like this should be worn, at least for a little while, to remind the two of them of humanity had once achieved. At least that seemed like a good enough justification to slip it over herself and feel like a girl again. It was extremely tempting to wake him to share her find, but his solid sleep was just too comforting to interrupt. His arm turned out to be a good place to lay. Suddenly, it was no longer indestructible. What she had been relying on to hold her and keep her safe and complete was made of bone and muscle. It could be broken, shattered, torn. It was far too fragile to be counted on. Perhaps this was what had been bothering her for a while. Luckily, she was far to smart for that. Pulling herself tighter to his ear in a grip that not even he could have broken, was her mouth. From it, spontaneously came the words “I don’t love you, you know.” He grumbled and tried to pull away for a second before giving in to sleep again. Spookiness of the house was beginning to fade into a home like any other. Dreams would be better tonight. “What time is?” he asked as they both sputtered awake. The room was now invaded by bright sunbeams around the edges of the curtains. It had suddenly become morning. She was barely able to respond with a crusty mumble. “I don’t know. Sun’s up.” They were both still heavy to move themselves. “It’s your turn to cook.” “What are going to do about the cat?” “She’s made it this long. She’ll be fine.” Vanessa stretched and yawned. “We could stay here.” “Hmmm?” “We could move into a different house every day and eat the food and stink up the bathrooms and dirty the sheets…” “People are counting on us.” She was disappointed that he squashed her fantasy so quickly. “Stupid people.” “Yeah, what the heck were they thinking?” Garrison didn’t seem to be in any hurry to move either. His speech was muffled into a pillow. “A little longer. Some bikes in the garage. We can ride and make up time.” A puzzled twitch went over her closed eye. A close call had caused them to abandon their bikes a few days ago. It was decided afterwards that being perched on a moving pole out in the open was not an ideal situation. It was a point she would bring up later. For now, more sleep was not something to be argued against. They drifted off together again, this time in blatant disregard for the opportunity the sunlight provided. It wasn’t long before something disturbed their sleep. They’re eyes were wide open in front of each other’s and answered the question of whether they had both heard it. Either that or they had just had the same dream. From the edge of sleep it still lingered in Vanessa’s upright ear. Thudding wood, shattering glass, tinkling broken dish pieces on a tile floor? The hutch in front of the window? They held their breaths motionlessly. False alarms were freaking her our far too often. She was tired of being stressing out at every half-heard noise, no matter how seeming real. In the distant hall, the stair alarm began squealing intermittently and then stopped completely with a cracking thud. Looking up, they spotted Chastity watching them with wide yellow eyes from on top of the armoire. They’re lingering inaction ended with one last shared look of ‘can you believe how unready we let ourselves become?’ It was the last thing communicated to each other before rolling off the bed in separate directions toward their guns. The End. |
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ooooo I see what you did there...
Thanks for the story! Byte |
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Great story, looking forward to the next.
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You are a cruel, cruel person... What or who is after them? What is the package they are carrying? What scenario would cause a collapse where they can depend on food still being in houses? Why were they picked for the task? Where did they start and where are they going?
Oh well it's a good story and my imagination will have something to do. Thanks for your writing and I hope to read more. |
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I'm puzzled.
![]() Neither made it to their Gun? ![]() What got them? ![]() Was the cat somehow involved? ![]() ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? I kinda got the idea that they were a couple of Wankers anyway..... But still..... ![]() .....RVM45 ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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Its true, there are a lot of unanswered questions. I could fill in the blanks, but decided to leave it to where the background story could be open to many scenarios. The reader can insert aliens, zombies, or vampires, mutants, foreign invaders or whatever. This story was an attempt to focus more on characters that would likely be in any disaster. Apocalyptic survivors will still have personal issues to deal with no matter who their adversary turns out to be. The background story became less important in this limited space.
Thanks for the input, guys! P. Samich |
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Thanks for the story, short but good.
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